i was shy and reserved
got nothing that i deserved
thought its time to scrutinize
but you didnt recognize.
im discovering new territory
to unfold a mystery,
you thought that as jittery,
its only that i have changed.
i shun all communication
to use my isolation,
you thought that as disposition,
its only that i have changed.
Prudence and patience
on which now i m based,
you thought i have aged,
its only that i have changed.
Time and Reality
by which now i m not hazed,
you thought i have been shaped,
its only that i have changed.
Things were simple before
they are still the same now,
you dont get it somehow,
its only that i have changed.
i liked that you ended each para with the same line..nice theme
ReplyDeleteThanks sir!
ReplyDeleteNice theme expressed well with the use of rhyme!!
ReplyDeleteAt some point of time, I guess everyone think about the change.Probably because change is the only thing which is constant!!
Not Sure whether Darshan has changed or nt.. bt the 'Drashya' of Darshan in my mind has totally changed.. Really appreciate the perfect choice of words and an accurate blend of rhymes.. keep up the good work, buddy!!!! --- Pranav
ReplyDelete@Pranav - Thanks a lot for those encouraging words ...i will keep posting !!
ReplyDelete@intuit - Thanks again!!...Correct , Change is just natural activity so there should be no surprises.
Darshan, Keep it up....
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